Before we handed in our rough cut we decided to sit down as a group and write down all of the things we thought that we needed to work on in terms of the narrative and performance to see if this was replicated in the feedback we get from our peers and teachers after the rough cut is handed in.
Here are some of the things we wrote down:
We know that all of our performance footage needs to be re-shot so there aren't really many specific things we wanted to take note on just the footage in general needs improving in all aspects.
In terms of the narrative, we have found quite a few aspects we need to improve in order to make the narrative as clear and as affective as possible, whilst also only making up 50% of the video. Our rough cut was very narrative heavy due to the issues we had with our performance shoot.
We also just generally want to make some of the narrative scenes cleaner and more professional as well as really making the story understandable by improving the acting. A lot of the changes we have wrote down to make about the narrative, are to do with the pace of editing. whilst filming some of our scenes we didn't film from enough angles in order to make quick cuts. This then resulted in some pretty slow paced editing which becomes quite borrowing and doesn't match the song.
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